Dude, three things: 1: The highpoly is great. 2: The lowpoly is dragging it down, hard. 3: The concept is in perspective, silly! You cant just line that shit up. Everything gets ultra-squashed from top to bottom in your version, it's like you put him beside the concept and tried to match the proportions without accounting…
Looking good man. My 2 cents: I think the bicep is sitting a little low on the arm. I think you need to subtlety breakup the smoothness of the pants on his butt because the rest of the pants have a lot of folds and it's looking a bit inconsistent. His under shirt is also looking a bit smooth (particularly on the outer side…
Real sweet man, you got something really good going on here, and I can tell by the sculpt that you've stuck to the concept real nice. Just three small things I noted, feedback-style: 1. The chin looks a bit thicker on your model than on the concept of the face, since it feels like a pretty important characteristic for his…