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Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Hey, I think it shows that you put a lot of effort into this already, but I'd step back a little bit for a second. What makes the original concept work so well is the fact that it mainly consists of three colors: The red parts (brick, deer, robot hand), the concrete and plants in this desaturated green and grey and the… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Been a while since I've seen this, it's come a long way. Good job! Your lighting is your weakest point but I think you know that. I really want to see it match the brightness and saturation of the concept more. I love that "Uncharted" level of saturation. Right now it's just way to contrast-y and desaturated. It also looks… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Hey guys thanks for the comments guys! The_blenderer yeah I still kinda of noob still when it comes to lighting, I am trying to get better, and I still very new to cryengine 3's light system st, so I will look at those articles right away and will continue to work on my lighting! Rexm: Can I bake the highpoly information… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Its come along way since the beginning. I think it needs to be a bit brighter maybe, or chuck a few point lights in to pick up some highlights it looks really flat in some areas the car bottom left, the car hanging in the midground i couldnt really make it out at first. I think you need a big break in the wall to the right… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Nice. Maybe the light from the right wall darker. I thing its hard to see the daylight. Without the blue color its nearly impossible to locate. -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
Gets nicer each time! I would look at the original concept and blur your eyes, take a brush in Photoshop and colour pick each major blob of colour and how far they extend. Try to get similar perspective in your camera and work from there. Its to green right now, off the in distance and the crack in the roof needs much more… -
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imho you're still pushing the color saturation of your lighting too hard. On the one hand it's unifying all the different elements together. On the other hand I think it's all being lost in a mush of yellow. Take a look at your concept again or your own screenshot from before. With the concept the lighting is fairly… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
have you used a visarea and portal for this? It might help you to balance the internal lighting and external lighting a bit more. As you will be able to control the internal ambient colour separate from the external lighting. -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
lighting seems way more messy than in the concept. for example on the original picture the robotic hand is a clear focal point. it's placed inside a large spot of light, and there aren't any distractions around it. on your version there's a shadow that goes through the hand and grass around it hides fingers. that metal… -
Re: [CE3] The Bridge
I'm also not a fan of the seam between the wall on the near-right and the floor. It doesn't quite look right, maybe it'd be good to add a skirting or something. Other than that, it looks brillo, and I'd definitely second what IchII3D said.
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