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Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Started my next animation scene! Fairly rough, so lots of work to do still. As always, any comments, critiques, etc are very welcome! First pass: [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GN7fkl0dXl8"]Robot Scene (Animation) - WIP 01 - YouTube[/ame] Thanks for looking! :) -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Hello there Mezz, Its great to see you steadily improve with your animations. I think that by now you pretty much know all you need to know from a technical standpoint : motions are clean, and so on. However the timing of the action beats is off and feel very forced. I think you should simply take the time to physically… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Cool thanks, fixed that up, smoothed it out a bit, so hopefully it looks okay now! Also, bunch of other tweaks. Smoothed some stuff, sped up some parts, etc: [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1ZaaDkApko"]Robot Scene (Animation) - WIP 05 - YouTube[/ame] Hopefully getting close to the end now! Any part that still… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
I'm about ready to call this piece done... added a few more tweaks, to the kip-up, a bit to the slap of the legs, and when the torso flips over, along with various other areas. [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Rc4qJr1hT8"]Robot Scene (Animation) - WIP 06 - YouTube[/ame] Calling it done unless anyone notices a part… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Still chugging away. Another update! [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91I-NYe-QGY"]Robot Scene (Animation) - WIP 04 - YouTube[/ame] Hopefully you can spot the differences... notably in the upper body crawl, the slap, and a bit of the inital leg walk. Tweaked a few other spots too. Please let me know what areas still… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Thanks a lot for all the replies, guys!! I've taken note of all the comments and hopefully have addressed them all for this next version. There are still areas that I don't think are quite there yet, but I'm hoping I've at least moved in the right direction. [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iJ1_aE4Lapo"]Robot Scene… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
he still has foot sliding, just a little bit, his right foot, other than that a decent animation -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Thanks guys! Hope that looks all fixed up in this version. [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wcth5ssTbaI"]Robot Scene (Animation) - YouTube[/ame] Hoping I can call this one DONE! Thanks to everyone that commented :) -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Thanks gsokol for some really great feedback! I took it all into account for my next update, which is why it unforunately took so long. I redid a few parts to make it more interesting, and this ended up taking more time than I thought it would. Next time, I need to plan this out better... The only part you'll find I did… -
Re: Silly robot, tricks are for kids! (Animation)
Thanks a lot for the replies! Pior -- Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it. I am happy to hear it looks like I have all the basics down, which I agree is now feeling that way for me. Now that you mention it, I definitely see what you mean about this scene feeling forced. Since I won't have to worry quite so much…
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