Shoes and shirt are pretty good imho. Pants, not so much right now. The stripes really give away the UV distortion, and the pirate patch needs to have some lighting to it. Also, maybe some big stitches on the sides of the pants?
The patch on her rear looks a little too perfectly attached. I guess I just associate pirates with poor tailoring, but I'd like to see some big ol' stitches holding it on. Ones like she has going up the sides of her legs. As for the feathers, they seem oddly flamboyant compared to the rest of the character at the moment.…