I agree with BluPanda on the length of the breakdown and showcase of the marine. Additional suggestions would be to swap the dragon the rigney sculpt, so you have your finished textured stuff up front, because that will carry more weight than untextured sculpts. And I would take out the "Thank You" page at the end. It's a…
The Marine is your strongest work, very nicely done, he should be your centerpiece. Make sure you provide breakdowns and anything you can showcase technical workflow or pipeline. I think the hitcounter is unecessary. If you have other means of viewing your page counts thats great, but if anything just stash it somewhere…