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[Animated Short WIP] GreenThumb
„An Animated Short movie in optically likeable Cartoon tradition with a flavour of british / black humour“ Hello, I want to present to you the animated short we are currently working on. It`s about an old, grumpy rabbit with a very bad karma. Despite the fact that he lives in disharmony with nature and all its creatures,… -
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Looks interesting. IMO the clouds in the nightime sky look a bit too bright and similar to the daytime ones. Clouds at night tend to take on colors more similar to the sky around them than during the day. Are there any animation samples yet? -
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Thanks for the replies :) Somberresplendence: uhhm yeah thank God we don't live in the USA we'd have allready failed =P Odium: Hmm maybe we can spice the sky up a bit later on in postprocessing have to see about this. Goat Justice: Good Point thx! Changed that, And yes there are. Vig: Thank you. Yup shes got the most… -
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Interesting. The characters are shaped oddly, particularly the woman, why is everything smooth except for her hands and feet? I like the environment, the clouds are neat. You should probably establish the gardens since they're a major plot device. The dead tree has a lot of character, but the other tree looks bland and… -
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Cool idea, nice modeling! I'm not sure I really dig the whole creepy guy in a rabbit suit, but strangely enough I'm cool with the chick, well all except for her name. Her feet look odd squared off. -
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No... Because that would imply its the Januaryist of the four, 2010 :p Damn yanks and your backwards dating systems :p In reply to OP, certainly looks interesting, and the visuals are lovely. But something about the sky seems off to me... Almost like its too empy? Maybe the sky is just taking up too much space on the… -
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You have already planned the impossible 0_o .... because I see month/day/year -
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the girl looks pretty mannisch, the shoulders are too wide, the chin is too square i do like the environment -
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I really like the cartoonish style you're using, but I agree that the female looks a bit too masculine. It could have something to do with the ears being down but that probably wouldn't impact the effect the marvel chin has on her. I'm also not a fan of the clouds, I think they ruin the scene at the moment especially in… -
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The characters and most of the other elements have a lot more attention paid to them, so things like the clouds and moon could use some love too, at the moment the clouds resemble whipped cream, a snail , toothpaste or some kind of disembodied long-billed bird head, and what looks like noise on the moon doesn't do justice…
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