I think you should add more connections connections between the arms. The dark texture on the upper section seems to work against the composition. I would lighten the top and add some darks at the bottom of the structure.
So.. should I make them thicker? Or add more connections between the arms. To me it looks fairly fine.. but that is probably because I've been looking at it for 100s of hours and everything is becoming one giant blurry blob to me. But if the national consensus says thickening, or more connections, then it shall be done!
damn this thing is cool- It has a real nice sense of scale. I cant help but think that the top needs something. maybe an observation platform? large antenna? satellite array? right now there's just these boxy forms that come to an abrupt stop. also - I second what everyone is saying about the grass and also the way the…
this is turning out great. Id love to see a whole scene of these, similar to this early ue3 shot. the only things that bug me atm, are the bright turquoise Ivy, and the connection between the the windmill propeller and the watertower looks very unbelievable, I know time is a harsh mistress for you, but I imagine you could…