Looks great! Great interpretation into 3d. Very true to the concept. The helmet / face mask looks like it's flush with the face though. I think there should be a bit of a lip there so it's more of a helmet and less borg. Welcome to Polyconut!
Interesting model thar. I agree some of the anatomy is disturbing, but i think in kind of a good way. Your concept art is beleivable that some of the boobage would be distorted in that corset thing, so side by side with that i can see this being intentional. The over the top muscle structure on the back fits too, though…