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Alley Scene
Here is an alley scene I am working on. I started a week ago. The setting is supposed to be in New York City. Any crits would be much appreciated. -
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It's getting better. Your lighting is pretty boring. Honestly, I wouldn't call this an Alley, it feels way too open & spacious to be an alley. I would love to see a wireframe of the truck, because I can't for the life of me figure out how you used up 4500 triangles in that thing. . . It looks like it shouldn't be more than… -
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Can you also post wireframe of the entire scene? If it's 12k tris with or without truck (it almost doesn't matter), it seems like you have a ton of wasted polies there too, since your scene is mostly composed of boxy shapes, so I can't fathom where all those polygons went. An occlusion pass would help a great deal to… -
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I like it but I saw the front tires on the truck are messed up. I have never seen a truck with 4 front tires but still a nice scene just needs some dirtying up -
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Here is an update. Tell me what you guys think: -
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graffiti, street objects (benches, light posts, fire hydrants newspaper stands, etc.) Basically you need some life in this place. ATM it might work well for a very desolate industrial area. That may be what you're going for, but it would be better to add those little touches to it. -
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The bottom level of the fire escape SHOULD NOT be lowered. That's a robbery in progress. More dirt of course (especially old newspapers and fast food cartons). You can never have too much dirt. Is this a modular setting where dirt and lighting would be added separately? By and large it looks pretty good for what it is, but… -
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There is no real limits other than it is supposed to fit in a MMORPG. Good one on the fire escape and garbage. I will fix that and psot the update tomorrow. -
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I'd say the container and especially the truck takes away from the overall quality, besides what's been said. -
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Yes, for the tires, make it just a plan cilinder and add detail with the diffuse map. There are also some scale issues i think, the truck looks too big for the scene or something.
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