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   Topic by samarth7523 · Oct 2025 · Home› 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

   Any suggestions on this render? Posing is weird, if there are any suggestions on the pose I would really appreciate that. Thanks.

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   Reply by samarth7523 · Oct 2025 · Home› 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

   Thanks for critiques. Applied the critiques you mentioned (except for the pose, will probably work on that next) focusing on the environment. And also some critiques other people gave me. First Version: Second Version:

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   Reply by Eric Chadwick · Oct 2025 · Home› 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

   I would greatly reduce the fog, and show the wave coming soon. Do you want drama, or relaxation? You could have the astronaut either facing the camera, or running towards the craft.

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   Reply by Eric Chadwick · Oct 2025 · Home› 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

   In the movie, perhaps the most dramatic pose in this scene is when they are trying to get back to this ship, struggling against the viscosity of the water. Ship seems untextured. Robot should be placed elsewhere, since it is merging with the silhouette of the ship, and thus it's difficult to read. Composition-wise the ship…