Thank you @sacboi so much for your feedback. I did go overboard with the roughness and contrast, straying too far from the original idea. I will take a few ideas from the article and make changes to my model as well. Thanks.
Your modeling is rich and detailled and spot on your ref. The normal is perfect. All the details in the texture like those screws, those letters and so on will make the final piece very interesting. But I agree with sacboi that you are overdoing it with your surfaces, unless your are going with the abandonned warehouse…
This project was intended as a small challenge to the competition, but in the end, disappointed with the result, I decided to continue creating and wait for better changes. As a result, at the moment I have reached a small dead end. This is the stage of modeling and searching for forms, I don’t think this is interesting,…