Before anything i am not an animator what so ever, felt like that one minute bump was too long so i can here to post a response for you. Any whozile i see a pan movement then some fog and or mist passing by. (idk what program you are using) but panning is not too hard to do, so i do not know how helpful i can be. I like it…
as David said, I'm not animator myself, so my critique is just on general ideas. From my point of view you built a scene, slapped on some SFX and had a simple camera panning right to left to show off what you built. First off I don't think the sound fits this scene at all, or maybe it does and there are other elements that…