Hello! I kinda suck on body anatomy so I can only advice on facial structure . 1) Looks overly masculine . This part should be eyelid , not eyebrow . 2) Make the cheek rounder .
Good advice above!If you look on the web for anime anatomy, its kind of exact, then simplified. Just means all the lumps an bumps are where they are supposed to be, just not as detailed. Looks like your model is pretty smooth, but any lumpyness can be visually distracting. To get around that you can do like suggested above…