Hi People I have been blocking out a little animation, and was hoping you could provide me with some feedback? I have so far only been focusing on blocking out possess and timing. I will make lip sync later. Thank you for your time :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3D0BhLHjJ1w
It’s a pretty good foundation except for maybe how your last two shots are working. There’s not enough difference in the second to last shot and the last shot so it almost reads as a camera mistake. I would recommend changing up the last shot more or moving the last bit of dialogue into the second to last shot. Other than…