Looking for feedback on a lip sync animation

lu_raziel

Hi People
I have been blocking out a little animation, and was hoping you could provide me with some feedback?
I have so far only been focusing on blocking out possess and timing. I will make lip sync later.
Thank you for your time

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3D0BhLHjJ1w

AlexAng

It’s a pretty good foundation except for maybe how your last two shots are working. There’s not enough difference in the second to last shot and the last shot so it almost reads as a camera mistake. I would recommend changing up the last shot more or moving the last bit of dialogue into the second to last shot. 

Other than that in general you could offset or texture the motion a little more, there’s a lot of things moving at the same pace in a few shots, most noticeable in the last shot where she “pops” for emphasis and her entire body moves at the same rate. If you look at her arms there’s a few places it’s the motion is twinning even though the poses are different.