My aim is to model a bust of the top half of the image below, but in a more stylised version. I didn't like the face i posted above so, I've done a lot of tweaking and more work on the face. (I've yet to touch the neck) _>
Based off the reference, I'd say the best feedback I could give would be that the references face seems fuller in the cheeks, and her chin should be a bit wider. I also noticed that her eyebrows in the reference are further spaced apart, whereas in your sculpt the tips of the eyebrows are closer together. You're in the…