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Seeking Feedback for Animation
Hi all, please feel free to review and critique about my animation. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/7d8806e7862b/ https://syncsketch.com/sketch/0fec3959b939/ edit: updated links. didn't know it was private link previously. -
Re: Seeking Feedback for Animation
@Archanex Oh, they felt like they're still in stepped? The one that has dialogue should be splined. Ah, okay. I didn't realise. I tried to imagine like being very focus in reading the book and bring it up closer to his face, also tuck in his arm a little bit more than usual. And this animation is stepped, I thought it… -
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I think the guy walking is my favorite between the two, they both feel like they're still in stepped. One thing that stood out to me is the way the guy is holding the book though, it feels like his wrists are bent in an unnatural kind of way. Also on the dialogue, what does the cylinder represent and why is she knocking it… -
Re: Seeking Feedback for Animation
@Archanex hi ya, didn't know bout that. I've updated the link. Please feel free to review it. =D -
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personally I think I'd remove the cylinder, it's raising questions and not adding anything to the scene. I think it's fine to have the book up close to his face, but the angle that you have the wrist bent at feels awkward/uncomfortable, maybe have him grip the book from the bottom instead of the sides? Or just keep it the… -
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we can't see it, it says it's private -
Re: Seeking Feedback for Animation
Yo, I added a few comments too. Great job.
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