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Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
Some of my original critique still applies, mainly about the twinning of the arms. I can see that you're adding more breakdowns to smooth out the action. Since it's not super different that the previous versions, you'll have to let me know what specifically you want critique on, otherwise keep charging ahead. If you're… -
FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
As always, any feedback would be appreciated. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/fabf8daf052f/#537216 Thanks, Cameron -
Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
Hey, thanks for the notes. Do you mind taking a look at my updated version? -
Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
I see you added the anticipation at the beginning and settle at the end. I think the arc looks fine at this stage. As for the weight of the gun, that's totally up to you to decide as part of giving character to the mech. Is it super powerful, or basically a human? Is this for a school project or personal project? The… -
Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
Before digging into the poses and timing, I would work on the base concept. First, I'm not clear about what he's doing. I assume it's kind of a taunt/flamboyant way to start shooting at something? If so, I think it could be pushed further. Second, not that everything has to be realistic, but the general timing of him… -
Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
@tholmes3d My latest version is up. Do you mind taking a look? https://syncsketch.com/sketch/fabf8daf052f/#557521 -
Re: FEEDBACK - Gun fire Animation
Personal project. So I have time to do all the things.
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