Hey guys! I felt I've built up the courage to post my scene to you guys for the feedback, a while back I started working on recreating Jonas De Ro's concept piece office days for my portfolio as I loved the challenges it represented. I also decided to change some parts over to make it my own, we still have plenty to add…
This is exactly the feedback I was looking for so thank you! To meet your first point, when working on the walls I was unsure how far the windows went down to the skirting board, this was especially difficult to read when you look at where the desk's where placed in the concept but I do see what you mean here, shall…
Awroecreative, looks like a nice project :) I would try to stay true to the original Proportions. The concept has lots of vertical lines (like windows going almost floor to ceiling, getting picked up by trims), which is something to be conscious of. If you take too much of this away the room might feel different. In your…
@ Awroecreative If you chose to replace the cabinet, I'd loose the existing one (maybe you find use for it in another scene). Something above the cabinet might also be important - makes it part of the room (cabinet in the concept looks like it's built-in). I think having elevations helps a lot figuring things out when…
I like the piece, however I think the lighting needs work use lumens instead and maybe some IES Profiles. Also your materials to me seem to rubber and shiny, are the nodes hooked up correctly or was it this way in your paint program. So change the lights to more dim them more maybe added some haze like someone was smoking.…