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Note in a Bottle critique
I decided to work on smaller projects to better my skills in my work. This project is my Note in a Bottle projects. Any critiques are very welcome. (Low Poly) (High Poly) (High Poly Note) (UVs) (Renders) -
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@Brian "Panda" Choi Thanks and ok -
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Went back and made a few changes to the model. I just want some opinions on the bottle and the sand if you can. (Low Roughness) (High Roughness) -
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@BioLumi yeah i see what you are saying. I'll go back and add some more stuff to the scene -
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It's a good start, but I think adding some distress might help. Maybe in the roughness/reflectivity might give it some more character, like its been in the water a long time. The ground material needs a sculpting or a displacement map at the lower angle shots. -
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**Updates** I went back and added more grunge to the bottle -
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@Brian "Panda" Choi Sorry for the late response I had to go to work last night. (References) At first I was going to make a champagne bottle with the label and wrapping on it but I ran into problems with trying to make the foil at the top. I am still going to work on the champagne bottle I just need to think of other was… -
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What reference aree you using? -
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Nice. Add some water spots.
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