Note in a Bottle critique

YaboyZay

I decided to work on smaller projects to better my skills in my work. This project is my Note in a Bottle projects. Any critiques are very welcome.

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Brian "Panda" Choi

Nice.

Add some water spots.

YaboyZay

@Brian "Panda" Choi Thanks and ok

Brian "Panda" Choi

What reference aree you using?

YaboyZay

@Brian "Panda" Choi Sorry for the late response I had to go to work last night.

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 At first I was going to make a champagne bottle with the label and wrapping on it but I ran into problems with trying to make the foil at the top. I am still going to work on the champagne bottle I just need to think of other was to complete it.

YaboyZay

**Updates** I went back and added more grunge to the bottle

BioLumi

It's a good start, but I think adding some distress might help. Maybe in the roughness/reflectivity might give it some more character, like its been in the water a long time.

The ground material needs a sculpting or a displacement map at the lower angle shots.

YaboyZay

@BioLumi yeah i see what you are saying. I'll go back and add some more stuff to the scene

YaboyZay

Went back and made a few changes to the model. I just want some opinions on the bottle and the sand if you can.

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