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Looking for improvements - Modelling a Sony walkman- University work
Hi everyone, I'm looking for any improvements on a piece of work that I completed for my 3D modelling course, the object I modelled was the Sony TPS-L2 walkman, below I have included the image I used to display the model as well as a larger image of the final model. -
Re: Looking for improvements - Modelling a Sony walkman- University work
For starters the presentation could do with a lot of work. Right off the bat it screams 'student / amateur' which is not good. Have some faint shadows under the model, right now it's floating in a sea of white. Speaking of white, use more neutral background colours, the white is burnin' ma eyes. You should also look up 3… -
Re: Looking for improvements - Modelling a Sony walkman- University work
Agreed with @TheLittleJay 's points, and one more thing: add more polys on the cable and headphone pads! There's obvious faceting there. Other than those things, this is a fairly simple rectangular object so the modeling seems fine. If you post a wireframe view we can see your geometry better. To elaborate on Jay's point…
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