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Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
Hello! This is my first post(?) Here heh i domt yet know how things go here so please forgive any mistake i make and guide me if you can. Anyway I'll start by giving you guys a link to my ball animation i did this evening, hoping to get some opinions. I'd appreciate it a lot :smile: Thankyou! https://youtu.be/T5fbhT9-S4Y -
Re: Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
Hi there! ImI glad you liked the exercises xD About the last pendulum clip : the 360 rotation does feel a bit slower to me too but i kept it that way to avoid another thing xD i was just feeling lazy. But about the change in weight/gravi thing, ill need to check other's animations out i guess? Because im not sure if i… -
Re: Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
Hey crappy! The walk is looking nice and smooth, can tell you've got the curves under control which is an underrated skill in animation. Overall I think you could push both the rotations and translations on the COG before fixing up the knee pops. Knee pops are a final fix once you've locked down everything else because… -
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Hellow again! So i tried animating a simple pendulum movement across the screen and this proved to be way tougher than i expected. https://youtu.be/AuzrWTjAPcI This is after a few trials. I dont think this looks good but i cant point at why. Looking for help here :3 much appreciated! -
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Great animations! I like the playfull way you are setting up these exercises! The last couple of clips have a bit of the low gravity feel to them. It might just be because I read the pendulum as being very small, and I therefore expect it to swing faster. Also It seems more the right speed when it is trailing the platform… -
Re: Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
I think the bounce at around 0:06 should be a bit higher and have more hangtime (not a lot). Starting from 0:08 we can feel that the ball has an unsteady momentum when going up and down the half-pipe. The movement should be smooth. Similar to your other animations, when the ball stops it feels a bit abrupt and uneven.… -
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Hello again! So i worked kn a couple of more scenes. https://youtu.be/oHglHMrzeKo And https://youtu.be/LtvUaPvFpLY Any critique/tips will be highly appreciated! Thankyou! -
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hello again. Late post. been struggling with the walk for about 3 weeks now, ghosh xD thanks to everyone who helped me up until now. (altho i think this place is becoming a little inactive) anyway, heres the latest walk attempt: https://www.syncsketch.com/sketch/0a236f9bf8bf/ please leave any tips or critiques you can,… -
Re: Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
Hey! Is has been a while! i hope you all are doing well. well, i did not die, and neither did my passion. i went and enrolled myself in animschool for a term aaaand did some fun stuff, met some awesome people and had a great time. so i kind of have been busy to keep posting here. Thank you all again, for all the help you… -
Re: Beginner animator looking for critiques/help to get better... I guess
Hello! I tried (and failed i guess) at a personality walk with the same rig. This is supposed to be a feminine walk, but idk, it just doesn't look good to me. Please have a look and let me know what im doing wrong. Thanks!. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/513ccae1ee33/
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