In your concept the mustache has more curl, and the face seems to have more grit like hes seen a few places. At the moment your sculpt looks more like an officer than a pirate.
Hello there ! I just started working on my new personal project, I chose this design from Brian Matyas : I always liked pirates and I wanted to work on a male character for a while and it will be the occasion for me to work on more complex patterns on marvelous ! Even through I'm not going for likeness, I'll take…