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Cartoony Animation - Feedback
Hi Everybody! I've been trying to explore new animation styles, i usually do more realistic animations but i wanted to get out of my confort zone. What do you think ? All the comments are highly apreciated. BTW. Thank you for your feedback on my reel. It helped me so much!!… -
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Hi Grace, the animation itself looks pretty good but like @AnthonyAnimation said everything feels a bit too fast and messy at the moment. All the elements are competing for stage presence at the moment and its hard to know where to look. Try holding him in the air a little longer and have more space between him and the… -
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Cool! It looks like the arcs could use some cleaning up. If you want detailed feedback try uploading to syncsketch, that way we can frame by frame. -
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Thank you Everybody!! This is how it looks now. https://vimeo.com/221640851?activityReferer=1 -
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Left some notes, hopefully it helps! You have a solid base, just a few things to tweak. -
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The key with fast motion is that you need to give the audience's eye something to focus on. If everything is moving all over the place at a fast speed it's just a jumble. You have two key poses, sitting and standing, but in between that is a little indecipherable. Usually the head is what we tend to focus on, so try to… -
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Thank you so much!! This is perfect. -
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This is perfect!!! Thank you so much Adam :smiley: -
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Ohhh. i get it now, i need to work in the middle so the audience can understand the pose and the action. Thank you Anthony. I'm going to start working on that. :) -
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Thank you Anthony !!! Still learning how syncsketch works. i think this would be the link https://syncsketch.com/sketch/159246#197508 Thank you!!! :smile:
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