Whew, it's nice to see progress in my work while building this year's reel. Time to get this demo out there. Any critiques are much appreciated. Thanks in advanced! ^_^ https://vimeo.com/216303477?activityReferer=1
I think you have a good start! A general note overall, the title cards at the beginning and end can be cut way shorter. They only need to be one second long each. The recruiter can hit the pause button and check your info so don't worry about displaying it for a long time. The first shot is good, the timing could be more…
Left some notes on the first shot. Hopefully it makes sense, it's getting late. It has potential you just need to push the posing and timing and you'll be in a good spot.
Yeah, for sure! First Piece - https://syncsketch.com/sketch/153188#183652 Walking piece - https://syncsketch.com/sketch/153178#183640 Run Piece - https://syncsketch.com/sketch/153177#183633 Last piece - https://syncsketch.com/sketch/153187#183647 Thanks for the reviews, guys. I super appreciate it. ^_^ Gonna go back in and…
Nice stuff dude! Overall, I feel like the weight is a little soft. Everything feels a little light and disconnected. But I think you have some great ideas and I love the last piece! nice!
Nice stuff man. I think Lisa could do with a little more movement in the knees on the walk loop with staff. as it is her knees are pretty locked in the same direction and makes her look kinda bow-legged. similar for the run loop, it's less of an issue there, but for a feminine look her knees could be little closer toward…