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1. General Feedback for Animation Sequence

   

   

   Topic by CapoeristaKelley · Apr 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello, I'm a student and I'd like to get some general feedback for my sequence please. I'd like all aspects to be critiqued, Modelling, Animation, Simulation, Lighting etc. It was rendered out in Mental Ray. Thank You. Here's the Link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoLsHJYmToM I already want to put a cloth simulation on…

2. Re: General Feedback for Animation Sequence

   

   Reply by AnthonyAnimation · May 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Interesting shot! It seems a bit abstract so I'm having difficulty parsing exactly what's happening. Since this is the animation forum I can comment on the animation. It's a bit minimal and stiff. If I understood the characters motivation I might be able to give better direction. Right now it seems as though he's…

3. Re: General Feedback for Animation Sequence

   

   Reply by CapoeristaKelley · May 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Thank You very much for your feedback, it helped with my evaluation a lot. You were one of the few who actually gave feedback so again thank you.

4. Re: General Feedback for Animation Sequence

   

   Reply by HeXiFy · Jun 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Anthony pretty much nailed the critique on the head.. You already know about the clothing and how it looks when his arm bends.. The end scene, his whole body is too stiff and nothing is really going on.. At that point, the scenery behind him is becoming the main focus and he's just there. It's def. a lot to look at during…