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1. action anim, feedback need it

   

   Topic by tiagosol · Mar 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hey guys, I´ve been working in this animation and I would love to hear some feedback! always good to have some fresh eyes to see what can be improve :) Cheers, here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551 http://vimeo.com/210546226 here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551

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   Reply by AGoodFella · Apr 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   This looks great dude, only note is on f230, his hips are facing forward while his chest facing to the side. I would rotate his hips more so the rotations are spread more evenly thorough the spine. Maybe drop his leg earlier on f26 so it happens before the hand drops as well. On f135, maybe the ogre has a bit more bounce…

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   Reply by tiagosol · Apr 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Thanks @AGoodFella! I did some modification on the story. Hopefully now reads better and looks more action driven. Feedback always welcome

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   Reply by AnthonyAnimation · Apr 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hey @tiagosol, cool shot! If you could upload it to syncsketch it will be much easier to give detailed feedback.