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1. Feedback for 2D animation, please

   

   

   Topic by Alexis MR · Nov 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello everyone! I am working on a 2D animation for my game, it is only a ruff at the moment. I would like any feedback to make it better before next stage. * The game won't be dubbed, that voice is my own recording for reference, it is better to play it without sound and with active subtitles. ** Since the subtitles are in…

2. Re: Feedback for 2D animation, please

   

   

   Reply by Alexis MR · Nov 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello again, here is the ruff mostly finished. Though it is subbed, it will have some kind of lipsinc and a subtle movement in those long pauses. I revisited the Animators Survival Kit videos, and found and fixed a few errors myself. But, since I am close to finishing the ruff, I would reaaaally apreciate any feedback.…

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   Reply by _adamturnbull · Nov 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hey man, good start! The only thing I'd say is because there are a lot of gestures involving the arms make sure to keep an eye on your arcs. Also, maybe try exaggerating the movements slightly between the poses so they are more impactful and having a slight follow through after landing the pose. Just a few things to…

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   Reply by Alexis MR · Nov 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Thanks, Adamturnbull, sure that helps to get things smoother.