Feedback for 2D animation, please
polycounter lvl 6
Hello everyone! I am working on a 2D animation for my game, it is only a ruff at the moment. I would like any feedback to make it better before next stage.
* The game won't be dubbed, that voice is my own recording for reference, it is better to play it without sound and with active subtitles.
** Since the subtitles are in spanish, here is a translation: It is believed that there are two planes: the plane of mana and the plane of plasma. They exist in parallel without ever touching. It is believed possible to travel between the two planes, how could that be?
Thank you~~
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a9vbwo5cid4
* The game won't be dubbed, that voice is my own recording for reference, it is better to play it without sound and with active subtitles.
** Since the subtitles are in spanish, here is a translation: It is believed that there are two planes: the plane of mana and the plane of plasma. They exist in parallel without ever touching. It is believed possible to travel between the two planes, how could that be?
Thank you~~
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a9vbwo5cid4
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The only thing I'd say is because there are a lot of gestures involving the arms make sure to keep an eye on your arcs. Also, maybe try exaggerating the movements slightly between the poses so they are more impactful and having a slight follow through after landing the pose.
Just a few things to consider going forward, its looking good so far!
I revisited the Animators Survival Kit videos, and found and fixed a few errors myself. But, since I am close to finishing the ruff, I would reaaaally apreciate any feedback. Thanks!