She's very appealing and believable as a character. However, I would have gone with a more stylized approach for the folds on the jacket. Something more in line with some of the refs you are. Basically, less folds and bigger, more silhouette defining folds. It would also have created great contrast with the tight jeans.
@Ouran A very good tip. I would probably have changed the folds on the arm to look more like this. And made the shoulder a bit sharper, in general a lot of angles should have been sharper for a bit more stylized look. @Suba Thanks man! I liked the grey hair too, but it didn't really fit the personality I had in mind. I've…