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1. First Animation - The Creature "Worm"

   

   

   Topic by Eishin · May 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hi, I've working on this for weeks, it's my first time doing riggs and skinning and of course the animation. I'm going to upload more animations, but I need feedback about everything hahaha. So this is my first Walking Cycle. Walking Cycle https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4DQALNMrvQ…

2. Re: First Animation - The Creature "Worm"

   

   Reply by Eishin · May 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Thanks for the tips, I got a new version of the video so you can see the animations clearly.

3. Re: First Animation - The Creature "Worm"

   

   Reply by Connecta · May 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Ah, yeah, what Slipsius said... skip the camera. And maybe brighten the scene up a bit? And perhaps change the background color to the basic grey (a bit more easy on the eyes)

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   Reply by Arturow · May 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello Eishin, Have a couple of notes for you: - The presentation is helping a lot now. - To me , the motion of the body feels right by now. I just suggest that you rotate his body a little bit to the sides since now he is just walking and rotating in just 1 axis. - With my last note I would suggest you offset the movement…

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   Reply by slipsius · May 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Your camera / turn table is making it impossible to critique your actual work. Ditch the camera.