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Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
It's about damn time I posted some new work, especially since I'm fairly stuck on a part of my animation. :( The second part of the animation where the character goes offscreen and tumbles back into the frame is still very rough. I've been having quite a bit of difficulty getting this tumble right. So I turn to you great… -
Sonny's Animation Flip Book
Since I wasn't sure where to post my animations for personal feedback and critiques I thought I'd make my own thread for stuff I am working on. Currently working on - To Be Determined Recently Completed - Body Mechanics #2 "Run and Gun" https://vimeo.com/166809685 Previous animations - Body Mechanics #1 "Ninja Jump"… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
After an art test and a little bit (okay a lotta bit) of vacation I finally have gotten back to animating in Maya. Current progress update : Still needs some polish with the timing, but it's looking more presentable now and would love to share it with you all and hopefully get some critiques on it. :blush: Edit: Can't… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
Thanks Arturow for the feedback. I'm really feeling the squashing and stretching of the hips, but I'll try to see if I can adjust it or tone it down a little bit. Also I've noticed a few little problems with the right hand snapping forward and the mid torso looking a bit weird. So far I haven't had much luck with that… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
Agoodfella, thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I went ahead and cleaned up a lot of the pops and weird unnatural looking movements. I've also taken it to completion and was wondering if you, or anyone else could give some feedback on how it's looking so far. I had to fight the previous animation I… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
Nice run. Front the view, I see a little pop. When his chest rotates to the screen left as his screen left foot comes forward, it pops a little. Like it hits that pose too fast, It feels jerky. The other side seems fine, though. I would try bring the gun forward across his body just a little instead of having it primarily… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
mm maybe because the upper torso is not moving with the body. If the whole body (now the low part) move back for the run , I think that the torso should move with it since they work as a whole. I mean if I am running and my hips are running forward and backwards it would be strange that my chest stay in place , like its… -
Re: Sonny's Animation Flip Book
It looks awesome Sonny! The only note I have is that the middle of the body S&S a lot , maybe tone it down a bit. Or I don't know , I like it a lot :)
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