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Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Heya Polycount animators! For the past few weeks, I've been working on an animation for a student competition and I was really hoping to get some feedback for it. I'm done the first pass of half it, and I was wondering if I could get some feedback. A few things that I know that I need to address are the fingers and hair of… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Bummer about the results, but keep at it. In terms of feedback, be careful of too much twinning in the poses and action. -The girl for instance shrugs both shoulders, lifts and lowers both hands and so on, almost as if the body is mirrored. -Also, you'll want to finese your limbs more so that the viewer can't tell which… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Damn, guys...Thank you so much for the critiques and the encouragement. At school, there aren't really many avenues to receive critique ( I'm pretty much the only 3D animator I know of there), so it means the world to me, really. I filmed some reference, but it didn't turn out so well because it was rushed (couldn't get… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Sorry about the results, keep improving, we all start from somewhere. In terms of your anim, I agree with Kielfiggins. Look at the hands, when they reach their most extreme position, they freeze making it look very IK. E.g. when she says i need out, hands go up and freeze for a second. At "Killing people", you've got a… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Hey Brandon! Sorry I didn't do this crit before. I wanted to, but given that I work at UbiTO, I felt like I needed to stay out of it all, even though I wasn't a judge of the contest.. This crit is entirely me, and in no way related to Ubisoft. I think you`ve really got off to a great start with this. The guys above have… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
I don't know much about lip sync but for the body stuff, solid start but a few things stand out. - the hands for the green girl look too twinned. Also, they rise and fall at pretty much the same time. Break it up, have one arm offset from the other, also, don't have it doing exactly what the other arm is doing, I feel like… -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Welp, the results are in and it seems that I didn't make it into the finals. To be honest, I'm pretty discouraged; but I want to improve upon this so that it's show-ready for my demo reel. Any feedback is always appreciated. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0T_vEc-poM -
Re: Competition Animation Critique - Feedback Much Appreciated!
Thank you so much, good fella! :) Thanks for the critique. I'm gonna implement your feedback today. Also LiS is just awesome.
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