Hey guys, been lurking here for quite a while but I've finally built up the courage to post some work here. I'm a second year student at the University of Hertfordshire, currently sorting out my reel to apply for internships before production properly starts on a small animated short we have to create for our second…
You are definitely not terrible, I feel you have put your 2 weakest pieces at the beginning, they feel very floaty. The animation on the phone I feel is actually very good got some good solid poses and it is easy to understand what is going on without even needing the audio on what he has just been told. Same with the fist…
Second year out of how many? First things first. Change the colour of the desk in the three shots that have desks. Being the same colour as the background is not a good thing. You may want to adjust the colour of the no armed guy. Since you used that rig so much during your reel, it would just be nice to have him a…
Thanks slipsius! Second year of three. If we're able to get a year in industry then we can make that four years. Doesn't happen all that often though. I'll take what you've said and make some improvements to it! Interesting that you think the horse is the strongest - I've been told by other people I've shown my reel to to…