Ya, jump screen left, landing screen right is called breaking the line. the 180 rule. It's a general no no. the characters left (screen right) foot needs some more ball roll action. It seems pretty stiff right now. Especially when he bends down to jump. your heel would usually go down when you bend down. His end pose, he…
Hello Evernier! That looks awesome!! - It looks strange that he jumps to screen left and then lands screen right :P I would place the camera to follow his motion. - I don't know if his left foot needs to slide while in the punch motion , maybe after because the strength of the punch comes from his planted foot. - His left…
Hey, Looks pretty cool so far. There's a lot of things you can do to make those punches and slam hit and feel a little harder though. For the first punches. You should favor the anticipates and the results of each punch a bit more (Hold/favor them for 1 or 2 more frames) while taking away some betweens on each punch. This…
Looks good, the Jump Slam is cool but the punch seems weird. His right arm doesn't seem natural and kind of snaps back to where it started after the punch. Theres no reason for him to bring his arm all the way back over his shoulder again unless he's going for a second punch, maybe have him bring it back around his hip and…