Welcome to the forums! Your reel is pretty unique. The presentation is definitely way different than the majority of reels, and shows some creativity, so kudos for that. However, when it comes to animation, the presentation is extremely poor. All the moving elements, and squares around the screen are so distracting from…
Hello and welcome AJCH22! What Slipsius said is spot on I have some critique too: - The first one is really fun but a studio that creates animation for children ( or an extremist studio ) would not like that animation haha - After the curtain, I don't think its necessary to have the character just standing there. - Instead…
Hi Arturo, and thanks for the crtitique, and sure thing, I will try to get into the Weekly Callenges :) Oh, and although I am not discarding the possibility of working in animation for children, I've always really wanted to work more on the videogame side of animation, but I will take in consideration what you said (maybe…
Hi, I've just recently entered to this forums, seeing that it might help look at other people's work, get to know other animators and artists and to have a little more of exposure as well. I've recently updated my demo reel and although I might feel it's good, I still want other people's opinion, so feel free to comment on…
Hi, and thank you, although on my inside I kinda knew that it my fall down to be more distracting than appealing, I wanted to do it like I did, but you are right, people might not consider me if they feel I am doing that editing for the sake of avoiding them to look into my mistakes. I was not aware of the black background…