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First animated scene - Feedback needed
Hey, This is my first post here, I've been working on an animated scene for university, and this is my first attempt at animating a full scene. I usually work on game animations. The character is becoming increasingly frustrated at the fridge over time before eventually caving in... I feel as if I have the majority of the… -
Re: First animated scene - Feedback needed
This is quite a long video. A little too long, I think, for your first one. A common mistake is people tend to bite off more than they can chew, and I feel that is the case here, which you touched on a bit in your description. So it's good that you recognize that. But ya, you went for quantity, rather than quality. My… -
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Incredibly stiff character. I didn't get the feeling that the character could be doing these actions. It doesn't seem believable to me. The first thing I would work on is timing. Speed up some parts and potentially slow other parts. It is pretty good for a first attempt at a large animation, but it needs a lot more work.… -
Re: First animated scene - Feedback needed
Not to bad for a start. I realize I am late to the party but I think something you could use is more close up's. everything is a mid shot so it starts to get kind of boring. For instance, from the point he walks into the room to the point where he opens the fridge is all on continuous shot. You could shorten this greatly… -
Re: First animated scene - Feedback needed
Hi! I dont feel that I'm good enough to give you any good feedback, but my overall thought was that the character felt stiff/mechanical. Ex: when the hands hit the table at the start, the lower arm rotates up mechanically and after that it goes forward and hits perfectly. Try to make it arc more, make it swing up above the… -
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Really good, but don't forget of the anticipation of the movements -
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I think you should add some recoil on fast motion . -
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I think it is pretty good stuff....
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