Mr.Moose, at first glance I can tell that your eyes are too close together and the enclosed eyeball is probably too large. the eyelids should wrap around the eyeball at sharper angles than what I'm seeing. This video should help you immensely in navigating the proper proportions and distances for the female head. That's a…
You should start with learning bones and muscles of the face first. There are great books about the subject that are invaluable: [ame="http://www.amazon.com/Artists-Complete-Guide-Facial-Expression/dp/0823004325"]The Artist's Complete Guide to Facial Expression: Gary Faigin: 9780823004324: Amazon.com: Books[/ame] This one…