Right now the text is taking over the presentation, try making it smaller and in a less contrasty color- like gray. Having a black outline on the lightsaber also looks really weird and doesn't make much sense. I guess you could also try to make the pose more similar to…
What do you guys think about the lightsaber change? THe new one is far less polys using inverted geo and also doesnt need the alpha channel I made - but I lose the gradient.. if that matters from a mobile view:
Hey Dustin Thanks for the response! I'm invested in the cloth wraps right now, but what sort of color scheme do you think would read better? I desaturated some from earlier, but willing to do more if need be. Also looks like I may have missed a marking on the back of her head.. I'm on it=) -Skywalkergirl - I'll probably…
Really cool character! I like the version you chose to model and paint, the color choices are really nice together. I think the execution was great. I've only got a few critiques (just my personal opinions) I agree with Abrvpt in the fact that I think a pedestal would really help sell the model better. I'm not a fan of the…