John I'd echo what Nosslak said. Right now you aren't showing mastery of anything really. Just going through the motions. I would focus on the art itself and telling a story through the environment. I see too many Artists just focusing on the asset/environment creation and not enough Artists focusing on the story and…
As for the portfolio website I think it's serviceable but it could be a lot better. Some quick points: 1. Bigger and more descriptive (zoomed out) thumbnails. Without the title in the thumbnails I would pretty much have no idea what the first two were before clicking them. 2. Your header and banner font looks terrible,…