hey Jade i did a paint over, hope it's a bit useful. I do think I might have made her look less African American though. I agree with Torch on that you should define your head shape more before jumping those subdivisions. just some explanations on my notes; - Her eyes i think could use more eyelid and be "softer" unless…
The... The facial structure is still really... Caucasian. Um. Have you ever looked for any artistic break-downs of what's different about african-american facial structure? You're using reference, but it still kinda feels like all you did was widen her nose... And the ref you used seems to be of someone with a considerable…
WIP 08 Widened her torso and hips. Scaled down her shoes. Continued work on her face, mostly more distributed skin pores and slight moles. Additional skin creases were added. Attempted to play with the lip sizes (is it still to big?). I will try to touch the nose later. Actually, I will do face passes later, do a cople…
You have a lot wrong here. The eyes are too big, the nosed is too wide/ big, the nostrils lack volume, the lips are way too big ( this is partly because you scaled them to your oversized eyes, the chin is too narrow, the nose doesn't transition to the cheek properly, the glabella and nasal bone need to be shaped more…
Style Board and Rough Concept (just to lay down what pieces of clothing I am making) My naked sculpt right now. Of course, there's a big personal issue of whether I should spend the time to absolutely nail down the anatomy to absolute perfection, and my artistic side definitely wants to. Time, though, may force me to back…
I'm doing to be honest, the face still doesn't read as female to me. I think the ears seem a tad small and a bit too far back and the neck shape makes the head seem too small or it makes her look like she has a very muscular neck. I think a few of the things that make it seem more masculine are the hard planes you have…
I don't think you should be working on clothing right now, the anatomy needs a lot of work. Arms are too short from the looks of things, forehead is tilted back too much, nose is too long as well as the lips being too large, the feet are pretty massive as well even for skate-type shoes. The calves especially look kinda…
== WIP 18 == After some time, I finally have the retopology done to a draft. I want to be thorough, so admittingly this step is exhaustive in terms of display. To note, the jacket is floating geometry, not attached at all, though I'm assuming this IS the method for dealing with complicated layered clothing sets. There is…
(I just started really working on this model again because of certain circumstances. I think the last time I touched this was two months ago. Also due to said circumstance, I actually need to beeline this to a finish with a week or two.) Dangnabit, I was looking at her photos and comped together a board while I was…