It looks like you're straying a bit far from the concept in a few key areas, which I think isn't helping the sculpt. I'll get to the face later, but the biggest thing that's bugging me is the angled bandolier around the hips. In your reference, the bandolier is actually a belt, looped through the belt loops of her "Daisy…
Oh wow I was not expecting so many answers!! DWalker Yah I know what you mean about the breast fold and the crease on her upper arm. I really like the look that they went for in the video with those kind of stylisation but I understand that some might not like it. Will consider keeping or changing it. I doo agree she looks…
ClusterOne I did touch up the nose but just a little bit, I would be surprise it's even noticeable in the render to be honest haha! Thanks for the crits! Dan! Thanks!! Glad you liked it! Scythe yeeeeeeeeaaaah!!! hair! Iciban Just modelled small strip of polygone in max, add a shell modifier and place it…
Hey guys! Once again I'm back with yet another female character (yaaaaaah.....) Decided to do something quite different from what I did last time with a very realistic and serious character. Always have a little bit more trouble with stylised stuff so Jinx is definitly a small-fun little project. If you don't know who Jinx…
Amazing job Marie, the bullets Materials and Textures ended up looking so much better then they previously looked like Looks like everyone is waiting for a posed version of her, you better deliver :D !!
if you want the mad jinx look to come through more, take care of the natural smile first and then raise her upper lids more. right now the expression looks fake, not madshit crazy, just not convincable. For facial expressions i would say get a mirror, look at the changes on all parts of your face.
Hard to say imo, the first one tend to look like a toy and it seems weird to me... but it add to jinx's crazyness like the joker's toy. I like the render of the second one, it look more dangerous, but like other said, some kind of damaged painted metallic would look awesome. Can't wait for a new screen background ^^
Looks much better ! I agree with PyrZern on the eyebrows, she'll look a bit more adult I think. Also I made a paintover to show what I had in mind about the face, looks a bit more proportioned I think. There's also this kind of fold that shouldn't be that defined with this size of breasts in a bra. Can't wait to see more !
I agree with doing more metalic look. Maybe not as harsh as show on the original image from video. Do play with the spec/gloss on specific areas, cause now it looks more like leather then metal (gloss/spec is to much overall the same) + some worn out edges (lighter colour of the base colour) can do magic when it comes to…
In terms of technicality, I think your sculpt is amazing. I'll add my two cents if you don't mind though. The nose looks too uniform from the tip to the nasion, looks like it needs more emphasis on the nostrils to balance it out. Also, the transition between the root and the nasion seems a bit hard, it could probably use…