Hey there, still studying myself, so take this with a grain of salt. Looks great so far. Although the nose probably anatomically works, it's bridge looks somewhat boring, as it shows none of the underlying structure. Right now its basically a straight line . Would be careful on just enlarge the cheekbone without adjusting…
Its not bad at all for a first go, the ear and the jaw look pretty good. I will just list off some bullet points to keep an eye on. The eyes are little to far apart, they should be close to an eye width between them. You have a decent shape for the nose at the bottom but the its lacking the bridge a little bit. Pushing the…