does your course offer classes in studying human anatomy in addition to creating cyborgs? your surface detailing is decent but overall the piece lacks accurate human form & definitions.
Are you planning on merging more torso and mech in the second concept? It looks a little odd to cut off right at the shoulder, like the two pieces aren't really part of the cyborg but rather sitting next to it without feeling attached.
I have been given two cyborgs to make for my Character Module and would like to get some feedback on what ive done so far please be as brutal as possible if it will help me get better. the First Character is below The First Character above has been completed according to the other student who's design i am working from and…