I think everything people have mentioned is spot on with the cap folds, and anatomy. I would add that I really like the shapes and design of the armor, but I think a tad bit of color would make it look awesome. Just my thoughts.
Hello Faltzer! For one thing, I think you could work on her anatomy some more. In general it seems like you have been studying anatomy a fair bit, and I think it is partially because of the design of her top layer of clothes that distorts her proportions. However, I mage a quick paintover of the side view to show how I…
You have the same issue that I'm having. We both need work on our anatomy. Here's a nice quick ref sheet from idrawgirls.com. Your model is about 9 1/2 heads high as opposed to 7-8 heads high. The next thing would be the cape. When cloth drapes it will have vertical folds not horizontal. The next few things to fix would be…