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Student Animator seeking critique
Hello all! I'm a young woman currently taking the animation program at the Art Institute of Vancouver.Part of our course is learning how to model 3D objects in Maya as after all, most animation is done in 3D these days. To this end, one of our courses (imaginatively known as CCM261) is requiring that we seek professional… -
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Dont be afraid to add some geometry to your hard edges to break up those hard lines. Your walls and cannon bases are very straight and hard lined. Rock walls can have some great silhouettes if you break it up. Also, in the 3rd picture, on the side of the wall, where it dips down for the cannon, you have some stretching in… -
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where are the animations? -
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Hello, nanaelh! I see that you are on this forum as well getting critiques! From what I can see, I will echo what others have said here: the biggest issue is the shadows. On the very first picture, it looks like that the tree is floating as there is no shadow connecting it to the ground that it's on. On the fourth image,… -
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Yes lightning and shadows need some work. I could also use some ambient occlusion, most of the props seem to float a little. -
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Thank you all. This was my first modelled environment I have ever done. I really appreciate all the critique you have provided me with and will most certainly make changes to it!
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