bunch of perfectionists in the industry. if the guy wants to call it done. he wont get a job. it looks QUITE GOOD as it is. all you guys have to just be satisfied with A GOOD LEARNING PIECE. :P Seriously though, i'm not actually trying to be a dick about this - saying "i've learnt a lot from this piece and it's time to…
Nice gloves, the body may need to be revisited though. ass is flat, even men have meat there. hands are flat in the original, your update seems to fix this. and the front of the body is flat from the nipples to the knees. post more angles and keep going! :)
Happy May! Once again, very cool concepts :star: I wanted to try out the eye, specifically have it track the player/ camera. First, blocked it out in Unity using primitives and worked on the functionality. Put the eye into a squashed container so it gets flattened and used a look at constraint with the camera set as the…
I agree with what CarkK3D is saying about work flow. It's the best way to reduce reworking any areas. The new Spec looks better, however, the textures still look very flat. I know that you mentioned that you were doing some sculpting in Zbrush, can you show some of those sculpts? I think that you're normal map, might be a…
Comin' along great dude. I think the weak point thus far is the height map on the blade, it's a bit flat, could use more gradients to get the normal popin. When you think of obsidian you think of something a bit more chiseled, with lots of geometric flat areas here and there with some cool organic ridges mixed it, right…
Saw your post in waywo thread, was too enthralled to notice much. What was obvious was the harshness of the post processing. I am in agreement that the foreground with the bridge is letting the scene down a bit. the arch below the bridge specifically looks quite flat. Not sure if 3D cattails are justified, but some of them…
I like the girabbit scene and animation. It stands out as your strongest piece. You have a soft style that works well for this scene, but betrays you in others. The Ice Dragon is the strongest offender since somewhere in a scene full of icebergs and dragons we'd expect at least a hard edge here and there. That demon's…
"My honest advice is to not apply for jobs in your area now, youre just using your one time chance to early." Same. Though I don't think people remember names after a while (definitely not a year later). But you won't get the job anyway at this point so no point wasting it. Your environments are again workable, but not…
^^^ This. as hard as this is going to be to hear, if you really want to do this character justice, you need to scrap what you have and start fresh. Just do an anatomy sculpt. Get all the nuances of the female form in...I'm not just talking about the hips, thighs, and chest. The female form has a lot of subtle detail that…
I think this looks good but the wood is a little flat, the colour is just a flat colour with the scratches on it, maybe add some more wood grains to the wood to give it some subtle variation so the colour isn't so flat?