Your presentation is fine, webpage is clean and good (Well carbonmade) your logo should be better tho Your work looks fine to me, sure there are enough small things to crit, but id say its presentable when you add your info to the images I dont like the strong yellow light on the city scene however, it looks like you have…
Why cant we see fullscreen gameplay instead of having 30% of the screen filled with a huge Ipad? I think people get that its on ipad if you just write it. If you insist on going with the whole "hey look its REALLY on ipad" then might i suggest after a few seconds you zoom in and give the audience fullscreen gameplay. Intro…
I am unsure if this is any use to you, but in the project folder the "BaseMaterial_ID" does not mask off the area with the colour defined in the ID map. I have made a change to the original ID Map adding a logo, but its done exactly the same thing, so now I have two areas which will not receive any material. This is the…
both ways work for me, what I would go on is really just per object, with a window what you have there is probably about all of the detail you would need for a HP object, some objects you could make a HP of and then add in extra details using photoshop for the normal map, that works best for things like logos that have…
Thanks for the feedback! I actually was on the fence about exactly how edgy this guy should be. I'll be working on the unmasked Casey next and give him a more modern gamer look. I'm looking to give the new Casey a hoodie with a Chameleon logo that would resemble a Skateboard company hoodie like Enjoi or Volcom. The other…
Definitely reduce the big header and maybe make some of the empty space at the top smaller. Right now I have to scroll the page but if you reduce the header and top margin it'll all fit nicely. The logos of your software used are really not necessary in the header. That kind of thing should be represented in the resume.…
Not too sound harsh but the way the tires are modeled look very unnatural, you can tell its a separate object. Since you are charging for this I wanted to chime in, especially about cars. Like sonic said its important to do research on the function for what you are building. Since there is an Audi logo i assume your…
I'll extrude YOUR polygons in local axis. You can play with my soft selection anytime. You can explode your geometry all over my autoback (I can't take credit for that one) I really should write the better ones down. I make dirty Max jokes til the Daylight sun comes down. It's all in context really. I tell someone that…
Yo your modeling skills are crazy, I love what you are doing but I think the wheels are horrible on that car, me personally I think you should of went with the original one's. My aunt has the car. Oh and I think the material on the tires need more tweaking, maybe turn the spec up or something they look to flat for a studio…
Good luck on the piece. The barrels right now feel a little too generic, the rust seems just slapped on instead of dripping down the sides or applied realistically. I think it would also help if you gave the drums a purpose. For example, they were oil drums from an old mining corporation or something like that, so you can…