Gotcha. She has a story. She's a heroine who started a revolution against two warring factions on her land. The two warring factions are normally superior to humans in every way but she managed to bridge the gaps in power. So when I concepted her, my idea, was to make her appear strong, empirical, and rebellious. Also I…
Not sure if you want to represent it in your sculpt, but because her arms are pulled back a little, the depth difference between her spine and the borders of the shoulder blades is accentuated (i.e they stick out more). This is pulling the lower part of the trapezius taut (and appears flat). Her shoulders are a little…
duuude, love that female character. the proportions and the silhouette looks great but you could stick in some more irregularity to her outfit, just like Fritzell mentioned about the face. Maybe some kind of waist strap leaning down more on one side of her hip or some cool armor glove/arm thing on one side. Perhaps…
Thanks ! Yeah her original mount is really bulky and she does spread her legs pretty much. Which looks quiet uncomfortable. Props to Seju for enduring this on the battlefield ! I made the kitty a bit thinner tho, and yeah i guess she'll had pantyhose or something. You see underpants a lot in sailor moon tho. But that's…
First texture pass, just roughing out the light direction and shapes. I'm experimenting with making her skin have a colder colour to it, so blues and purples instead of the peachy colour from her splash art, please let me know if you think it looks good or not! I Also adjusted some of the proportions a little bit - filled…
Yeah, she's too skinny and have no variation in shapes. This makes her looks unappealing. There's some concept, or you did her on the fly? Another strange thing is the fact that you are using photo textures over a cartoonish model. This makes her looks inconsistent, at least for me. I think more colorful, hand painted…
Love the head (front and back). In the front view it looks (to me) like the lower torso and the upper torso (including head) are at two different levels of scale. I'd either thin the legs up (which will make her very waif like) or bulk the arms *slightly* (which I think would look better). Also, if it was me, I'd lose the…
@Leinadien : Yeah a pacifier would look good too IMO. But I asked the the artist first if she's ok with me modeling her character and she said yes. i don't want to mispresent her workso I'll try to stick to the concept as much as i can. o:) @Tectonic : You're right, thank you! I flattened her breasts and reworked the…
Looking good, man. I really like the direction you're going with this! That said, the proportions of the arms feels a little off to me in your latest post. The mechanical arm feels much bulkier and more masculine than her other arm. I'd say the shoulders deltoids feel overly beefy as well and are making her shoulders feel…
I am glad we aren't doing the fire girl. Try to draw her anatomy in that pose without that metal shell on her back. Do a paint over. It doesn't seem like it would work and trying to fix a design may not be fun to do in one months time. It is a cool and fun concept, but I don't want to figure it out. I also don't think she…